The invite said simply 10pm 24 Dec and an address

The invitation lay, without benefit of envelope, on the hall mat together with a slew of Christmas cards and a note from the post office saying they had been unable to deliver your parcel and please call this number etc.

blue invitation with Christmas tree

An elegant blue missive, which said simply: 10 pm 24 December, The Old Mews. Formal attire.

Sophistication leached off the quality board into your chilly fingertips, warming them as if you had held your hands to an open blaze.

You turned the invitation over, looking for a name, an RSVP. The reverse side was blank. The Old Mews. A real enough address, with a number of (very expensive) dwellings hidden away down the wide cobbled lane where once carriages of the rich and their high-stepping horses trundled into shelter. Where nowadays City bankers pay fortunes to sleep in the former humble dwellings of coachmen and grooms.

But, not being of the City, you know no one who lives in the Old Mews. The invite is a mistake, slipped through the wrong door. You think of your neighbours either side in their pretty terraces with cast iron fences like your own, and lace at the bay windows – unlike your own more stylish Roman blinds. Neither the retired Council worker to the left nor the single middle-aged teacher to the right would likely have more claim on an Old Mews connection than you do. You caress the blue card, admire the tasteful design, and want the invite to be for you.

No. If not a mistake, it’s a joke. You are used to being the butt of jokes. Your meticulous ways (overly fussy the naysayers call you), careful clothing (dresses like a 1950s maiden aunt you once overheard in the ladies’ toilet) and unwillingness to be drawn into office gossip (too good for us, one snide commentator had put it, to your face), make you an outsider. You don’t mind, too much, when you are passed over for promotion, or are never the one asked to accompany the boss to client meetings. One day your talents will be recognised.

But this Christmas you won’t fall for their jokey traps. You won’t arrive at The Old Mews at 10 pm – three hours after the party started, if there’s a party at all – to be met with winks and grins and open laughter at your gullibility.

The invitation hovered over the paper recycling box, but you changed your mind and instead attached it to the fridge with the reindeer magnet your four-year-old nephew pressed upon you last weekend and which you had meant to hide in a kitchen drawer until the next visit.

Over the next two days, there were busy times at work when you didn’t think of the invite batting its alluring eyelashes at you from the fridge. You strained for snatches of jokes, for insider references to confirm your colleagues were behind this. There was nothing. They ignored you, panicked with their own deadlines.

***

red and silver glitter evening dress

It’s the 24th December. You stand at your wardrobe, fingering the bridesmaid’s dress you wore for your sister’s winter wedding five years ago. Full length, tight-waisted, with a layered skirt and fitted, scooped-neck glittering bodice, the colour is seasonally red – as if it was meant to be. You sigh, let go of the dress and shut the door on it.

You will have a light meal, read, go to bed. Tomorrow you will travel out to your sister’s home for turkey and pudding with your parents. You mentally check off the presents stacked by size on the otherwise unused dining room table. Everyone is accounted for. Not that they need anything, with their comfortable, contented lives.

You turn to leave the bedroom, hesitate. You open the wardrobe door, stare at the dress.

It might not be a joke. The invite might be for you. A secret admirer. A rich secret admirer. You sigh, tell yourself not to be silly, and close the door.

At 7.30 pm you put your dinner plate in the empty dishwasher, straighten up, ponder for a moment, and walk slowly upstairs. The invite on the bed lures you, demands you open the wardrobe door …

You go downstairs, open your book, start reading.

At 8.30 pm you put the book aside and go upstairs again. Try me on, see how I look, the dress whispers as you stroke its glittering top. You shake your head, close the door, and return to your book.

At 9 pm a fit of brashness overtakes you. Walking swiftly upstairs, pulse skittering with daring, you shower, wash your hair, dry it and let it float about your shoulders where it never normally belongs. You dig out your best underwear, new tights, apply a light touch of make up, and then, only then, gently lift the hanger with the dress from its place. You quickly wriggle into it, holding your breath, search for the row of tiny side buttons and do them up with trembling fingers. Only a tad tighter than five years ago.

The matching shoes are in a box at the back of the wardrobe, and you slide your feet into them, remembering now how they pinched after an evening of dancing … dancing with him … You brush the thought away. Love gained and lost in the heartbeat of a wedding.

You force yourself to look in the mirror but only to check all the component parts are where they should be. After calling an Uber, you grab your one coat and your gloves, and wait, fighting the nausea in your stomach which shouts at you to cancel the car. You don’t.

It’s just on 10 pm when the car arrives at the Old Mews. Many of the dwellings have Christmas lights blazing but the party house is identified by a doorman in an old-fashioned greatcoat and top hat admitting a line of smiling, chattering invitees.

You clutch the blue card and join them, recognising no one. Not an office hoax. Your mood lifts, even though the possibility of an incorrect address remains. You arrive at the door, show your invite. The doorman nods, gestures you through with a subtle, friendly wink.

And there you are, among the kind laughter of strangers, the scent of expensive perfumes, the headiness of seasonal joy. A dark-haired stranger in a tuxedo bears down on you, arms held wide.

‘My darling Jenny!’ he exclaims, and you blink because Jenny is your name, but who is he? ‘You came! As gorgeous as ever! Now we can let the night begin.’

And you fall into his embrace, and let your life begin.

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  1. THE INVITATION SAID SIMPLY 24 DECEMBER AND AN ADDRESS

    On stiff card and gold rimmed, the invitation said simply 10pm 24 December, Government House, Formal attire.
    Grant looked at it more closely. A Christmas Eve function at Government House – must be a joke, especially one starting so late.
    There was no RSVP. Grant had the feeling the invitation brooked no argument, you were just expected to turn up.
    What on earth could a Christmas Eve function at the Governor’s residence possibly be, he wondered. Not the sort of place a lowly lawyer, albeit in one of Melbourne’s largest law firms, expected to receive an invitation.
    Perhaps it was a mistake, meant for one of the senior partners. Yes, that was it. Grant’s last name was Pearce but one of the partners was Hugh Pierce. That explained it, and he heaved a huge sigh of relief. It was a few days before the 24th, plenty of time to clear up the confusion.
    The following morning, he knocked on Hugh Pierce’s door and, when asked to enter, showed him the invitation.
    “No, no, not for me – definitely for you,” Hugh said, with a grin.
    “But, why would I be invited to Government House,” persisted Grant. “especially on Christmas Eve of all nights.”
    “Well, you’ll just have to wait to find out,” Hugh laughed, as he showed him the door.
    Back in his own office, Grant stewed, more intrigued than ever. No matter how hard he tried, for the life of him he couldn’t understand what the Governor could possibly want with him.
    Over the next few days, Grant tried, without much success, to put the invitation out of his mind until, Christmas Eve morning dawned.
    “Ah well, today is crunch time,” he mused out loud. “Guess tonight I’ll finally discover what this is all about.”
    When he arrived at the office, everyone who walked by treated him to an amused grin. Must be something happening that I just don’t know about, he thought suspiciously. However, try as he might all his colleagues would deflect his questions with talk about their current cases.
    Once work was finished for the day and the year, Grant hurried home to shower and change into his best suit for the Government House appointment.
    Arriving on the stroke of 10pm, he was greeted by a footman, ushered into the drawing room and asked to wait.
    Several minutes later, the Governor strode through the door accompanied by all his firm’s senior partners and staff with huge grins on their faces.
    “Wh..what’s going on?” Grant asked, totally confused.
    “This is our annual Christmas Party,” Hugh Pierce chortled. “We always have it at Government House – and, as the new chum, this year we thought you would make a perfect Santa Claus. Here’s the suit (holding out traditional Santa garb). So off you go and get changed and we’ll see you shortly complete with your sack full of presents.”
    Grant was a little miffed at all the secrecy but relieved it was the office Christmas party and he only had to play Santa for the night as he headed down the corridor to a nearby room to get changed into the costume.

  2. Great story. A hidden desire to be loved and recognised after so long. Who is this guy? Obviously a long standing admirer😂

    1. I have no idea – I just had to finish the story! It’s the fun of flash fiction, leaving the ending wide open but with enough clues that the reader can pick st from it to satisfy themselves.

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